The Oliver's Madhouse

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Creative Corner – Feisty Sue

on 14/02/2013

Prose For Thought 2Having created a lovely poem last week Beth (age 11) decided to have another go at a poem this week around the same theme as last weeks, which you can find HERE but adding a romantic edge. So if your sitting comfortably she will begin:

There once was a  fiesty girl called sue

With wild green eyes looking at you

If you saw her you would see

How beautiful she looks when she she is looking at me

Yet all she wants is her true love

Who sailed on out to sea


11 responses to “Creative Corner – Feisty Sue

  1. Emma Day says:

    Lovely poem. Have you checked out my Wednesday Words Linky? xx

  2. Louise says:

    Very impressed with your girl x

  3. Helen Braid says:

    Ah lost at sea, it would bring a tear to the eye… What a talent this girl has! x

  4. Aw that’s beautiful! Beth should keep a collection and have them published she obviously has a knack for it! X

  5. Another excellent poem. And I agree with Victoria; feisty is an excellent word!

  6. Beth, you are so talented :). Great use of rhyming couplets again – and I love that you got the word feisty in your poem, it’s a good word 🙂 xx

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